is there anyone who would proofread it?? oO

I wrote it for my school journal ^^ anyway, as I'm not english native (italian one here!) I would like someone to proofread it, telling me grammar mistakes or if it is understandable and things like that..
text under the cut  =D

( << I don't belive in fantastic creatures or monsters or something like that.. it's just.. you know, kind of strange beliving that those beings actually exist... )